Nick Simicich <njs@scifi.squawk.com> wrote:
> "then that" is not reasonable English, as there is no antecedent for that
> in this case. Maybe the antecedent would become apparent if there were
> more context, but sentences in RFCs tend to get misinterpreted if they
> can't stand on their own.
Thank you for pointing this out. Fixed (hopefully! :-) by essentially
adopting your proposed language.
The revised version is http://maillist.info/rfc-draft/draft0.03.txt
Greetings, Norbert.
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